kilka zdań po angielsku do sprawdzenia :)

stricte · 2009-04-28, 19:56

Drogie wizażanki,

może któraś z dobrze znających angielski lub spostrzegawczych sprawdziłaby mi poniższy list. List może miec błędy gramatyczne/ stylistyczne/ rzeczowe.

Dear Mr Stiller
Tank you very much for your email informing me that I have won first prize in the competition. I am looking forward to going to Australia and attending the course.
I would prefer to attend the course in August. I have to go to Barcelona for three weeks in September so the course in August is great proposition.
I am really satisfied with having the English classes. The speaking and listening class is better than grammar and vocabulary since I have not any problems with grammar and I would like to improve my speaking and listening skills.
You asked me about the activities in the afternoon. Making a radio programme and doing a scuba driving course sound wonderful. I love music, listening a radio talk with people about their problems or proposes so making a radio programme is excellent idea. I love sport, water and open spaces so doing a scuba diving course is the big chance for me to make my wishes come true.
I would appreciate some further information about accommodation and clothes. Will I stay in a hotel or in a bungalow? Will I have to share my room with someone? What kind of clothes should I take with me? How about the weather in Australia?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes

dziekuję i czekam na poprawki, propozycje

Spoora · 2009-04-28, 20:42

Ogólnie v.well

Dear Mr Stiller
Thank you very much for your email informing me that I have won first prize in the competition. I am looking forward to going to Australia and attending the course.
I would prefer to attend the course in August. I have to go to Barcelona for three weeks in September so the course in August is great proposition.
I am really satisfied with having the English classes. The speaking and listening classes are better than grammar and vocabulary since I have not had any problems with grammar and I would like to improve my speaking and listening skills.
You asked me about the activities in the afternoon. Making a radio programme and doing a scuba driving course sound wonderful. I love music, listening to a radio talk with people about their problems or proposes, so making a radio programme is an excellent idea. I love sport, water and open spaces so doing a scuba diving course is the big chance for me to make my wishes come true.
I would appreciate some further information about accommodation and clothes. Will I stay in a hotel or in a bungalow? Will I have to share my room with someone (else)? What kind of clothes should I take with me? How about the weather in Australia?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes

To tak na szybko zerknęłam, jak coś znajdę jeszcze to dam znać

stricte · 2009-04-28, 20:58

Cytat:

Napisane przez Spoora

Ogólnie v.well

Dear Mr Stiller
Thank you very much for your email informing me that I have won first prize in the competition. I am looking forward to going to Australia and attending the course.
I would prefer to attend the course in August. I have to go to Barcelona for three weeks in September so the course in August is great proposition.
I am really satisfied with having the English classes. The speaking and listening classes are better than grammar and vocabulary since I have not had any problems with grammar and I would like to improve my speaking and listening skills.
You asked me about the activities in the afternoon. Making a radio programme and doing a scuba driving course sound wonderful. I love music, listening to a radio talk with people about their problems or proposes, so making a radio programme is an excellent idea. I love sport, water and open spaces so doing a scuba diving course is the big chance for me to make my wishes come true.
I would appreciate some further information about accommodation and clothes. Will I stay in a hotel or in a bungalow? Will I have to share my room with someone (else)? What kind of clothes should I take with me? How about the weather in Australia?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes

To tak na szybko zerknęłam, jak coś znajdę jeszcze to dam znać

dziękuję bardzo za sprawdzenie i poprawki

a jeśli chodzi o podkreślony fragment to użyłam słówka since jako ponieważ (zamiennik because) dlatego nie użyłam perfectów.

Spoora · 2009-04-28, 21:07

Ok, to jeśli chcemy napisać, że nie mam czegoś to albo "I do not have" albo " I have not got"

ale nie I have not samo. W tym przypadku (list formalny) lepiej brzmi to pierwsze, bo " I have not got" strasznie sztucznie mi brzmi

stricte · 2009-04-28, 21:10

masz rację, dziękuję za kolejną uwagę

Spoora · 2009-04-28, 21:14

Nie ma za co

I tak ja bym Ci postawiła 5

CaliDreamin · 2009-04-29, 00:55

Zmiany zaznaczylam gruba czcionka.

Cytat:

Napisane przez stricte

Dear Mr Stiller
Thank you very much for your email informing me that I have won first prize in the competition. I am looking forward to going to Australia and attending the course.
I would prefer to attend the course in August. I have to go to Barcelona for three weeks in September so the course in August would be a better proposition.
I am really satisfied with the English classes. The speaking and listening class is better (nie rozumiem do konca kontekstu, ale jezeli chodzi ci o to, ktora kalasa by ci lepiej pasowala, napisz: Since I don't think I have problems with grammar, I would prefer the speaking and listening class to the grammar class. The former would give me the opportunity to improve my speaking and listening skills. Jezeli chodzilo o cos innego, to prosze wytlumacz.)
You asked about afternoon activities: making a radio programme and doing a scuba driving course sounds wonderful. I love listening to music as well as talk programmes where people discuss their problems, so making a radio programme sounds like a wonderful idea. I also love water sports and the great outdoors, so doing a scuba diving course would be a wish come true for me.

I would appreciate further information about appropriate clothing and accommodations. Will I stay in a hotel or in a bungalow? Will I have to share my room with someone? What kind of clothes should I take with me? How about the weather in Australia?
I look forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

podpis

dziekuję i czekam na poprawki, propozycje

stricte · 2009-04-29, 10:57

dzięki ;*

CaliDreamin · 2009-04-29, 18:20

Jezeli masz jakies pytania to napisz na pw. Podstawowke,gimnazjum, liceum,i studia skonczylam w stanach, wiec cos tam znam z tego angielskiego.

wspaniala · 2009-05-05, 16:06

nie chce zakladac osobnego watku, wiec sie podepne. czy znajdzie sie tu biegla w jezyku angielskim wizazanka, ktora poswiecilaby mi dzisiaj odrobine czasu i sprawdzila moj list po angielsku?

nie chce go tutaj zamieszczac, gdyz jest to zadanie domowe z ksiazki dosyc popularnej jak mniemam, a przeciez nie chodzi o to, zeby zdobyc bez wysilku gotowe zadanie

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prosilabym o PW

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2009-04-28, 19:56	#1
stricte Raczkowanie Zarejestrowany: 2009-01 Lokalizacja: Kraków Wiadomości: 385	kilka zdań po angielsku do sprawdzenia :) Drogie wizażanki, może któraś z dobrze znających angielski lub spostrzegawczych sprawdziłaby mi poniższy list. List może miec błędy gramatyczne/ stylistyczne/ rzeczowe. Dear Mr Stiller Tank you very much for your email informing me that I have won first prize in the competition. I am looking forward to going to Australia and attending the course. I would prefer to attend the course in August. I have to go to Barcelona for three weeks in September so the course in August is great proposition. I am really satisfied with having the English classes. The speaking and listening class is better than grammar and vocabulary since I have not any problems with grammar and I would like to improve my speaking and listening skills. You asked me about the activities in the afternoon. Making a radio programme and doing a scuba driving course sound wonderful. I love music, listening a radio talk with people about their problems or proposes so making a radio programme is excellent idea. I love sport, water and open spaces so doing a scuba diving course is the big chance for me to make my wishes come true. I would appreciate some further information about accommodation and clothes. Will I stay in a hotel or in a bungalow? Will I have to share my room with someone? What kind of clothes should I take with me? How about the weather in Australia? I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes dziekuję i czekam na poprawki, propozycje __________________ ' Cierpienie jest na pewno rodzajem sensu. Bezsens przecież nie boli. Bezsens jest obojętnością.'

2009-04-28, 20:42	#2
Spoora Zakorzenienie Zarejestrowany: 2009-01 Wiadomości: 17 525	Dot.: kilka zdań po angielsku do sprawdzenia :) Ogólnie v.well Dear Mr Stiller Thank you very much for your email informing me that I have won first prize in the competition. I am looking forward to going to Australia and attending the course. I would prefer to attend the course in August. I have to go to Barcelona for three weeks in September so the course in August is great proposition. I am really satisfied with having the English classes. The speaking and listening classes are better than grammar and vocabulary since I have not had any problems with grammar and I would like to improve my speaking and listening skills. You asked me about the activities in the afternoon. Making a radio programme and doing a scuba driving course sound wonderful. I love music, listening to a radio talk with people about their problems or proposes, so making a radio programme is an excellent idea. I love sport, water and open spaces so doing a scuba diving course is the big chance for me to make my wishes come true. I would appreciate some further information about accommodation and clothes. Will I stay in a hotel or in a bungalow? Will I have to share my room with someone (else)? What kind of clothes should I take with me? How about the weather in Australia? I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes To tak na szybko zerknęłam, jak coś znajdę jeszcze to dam znać __________________ Teoria - to kiedy wiecie wszystko, lecz nic nie działa. Praktyka - to kiedy wszystko działa, lecz nikt nie wie dlaczego. W tym miejscu łączymy teorię z praktyką - nic nie działa i nikt nie wie dlaczego. Kto nie ma odwagi do marzeń, nie będzie miał siły do walki.

2009-04-28, 21:07	#4
Spoora Zakorzenienie Zarejestrowany: 2009-01 Wiadomości: 17 525	Dot.: kilka zdań po angielsku do sprawdzenia :) Ok, to jeśli chcemy napisać, że nie mam czegoś to albo "I do not have" albo " I have not got" ale nie I have not samo. W tym przypadku (list formalny) lepiej brzmi to pierwsze, bo " I have not got" strasznie sztucznie mi brzmi __________________ Teoria - to kiedy wiecie wszystko, lecz nic nie działa. Praktyka - to kiedy wszystko działa, lecz nikt nie wie dlaczego. W tym miejscu łączymy teorię z praktyką - nic nie działa i nikt nie wie dlaczego. Kto nie ma odwagi do marzeń, nie będzie miał siły do walki.

2009-04-28, 21:10	#5
stricte Raczkowanie Zarejestrowany: 2009-01 Lokalizacja: Kraków Wiadomości: 385	Dot.: kilka zdań po angielsku do sprawdzenia :) masz rację, dziękuję za kolejną uwagę __________________ ' Cierpienie jest na pewno rodzajem sensu. Bezsens przecież nie boli. Bezsens jest obojętnością.'

2009-04-28, 21:14	#6
Spoora Zakorzenienie Zarejestrowany: 2009-01 Wiadomości: 17 525	Dot.: kilka zdań po angielsku do sprawdzenia :) Nie ma za co I tak ja bym Ci postawiła 5 __________________ Teoria - to kiedy wiecie wszystko, lecz nic nie działa. Praktyka - to kiedy wszystko działa, lecz nikt nie wie dlaczego. W tym miejscu łączymy teorię z praktyką - nic nie działa i nikt nie wie dlaczego. Kto nie ma odwagi do marzeń, nie będzie miał siły do walki.

2009-04-29, 10:57	#8
stricte Raczkowanie Zarejestrowany: 2009-01 Lokalizacja: Kraków Wiadomości: 385	Dot.: kilka zdań po angielsku do sprawdzenia :) dzięki ;* __________________ ' Cierpienie jest na pewno rodzajem sensu. Bezsens przecież nie boli. Bezsens jest obojętnością.'

2009-04-29, 18:20	#9
CaliDreamin Zadomowienie Zarejestrowany: 2006-04 Lokalizacja: los angeles Wiadomości: 1 238	Dot.: kilka zdaD po angielsku do sprawdzenia :) Jezeli masz jakies pytania to napisz na pw. Podstawowke,gimnazjum, liceum,i studia skonczylam w stanach, wiec cos tam znam z tego angielskiego. __________________ Tell from my attitiude that I'm most definitely Nakarm zwierzeta w schroniskach ZA DARMO

2009-05-05, 16:06	#10
wspaniala Zakorzenienie Zarejestrowany: 2008-06 Wiadomości: 6 191	Dot.: kilka zdań po angielsku do sprawdzenia :) nie chce zakladac osobnego watku, wiec sie podepne. czy znajdzie sie tu biegla w jezyku angielskim wizazanka, ktora poswiecilaby mi dzisiaj odrobine czasu i sprawdzila moj list po angielsku? nie chce go tutaj zamieszczac, gdyz jest to zadanie domowe z ksiazki dosyc popularnej jak mniemam, a przeciez nie chodzi o to, zeby zdobyc bez wysilku gotowe zadanie . prosilabym o PW .

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