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A gang of three robbers broke into a bank in London. They were hopping to steala lot of money, but the men had unpleasant surprise. It was early in the morning on Friday, the thirteenth of July, 2013. They ran into the bank. They were armed. The robbers were dressed in black clothes and their faces were covered by balaclava. Then they screamed: "This is a robbery, everybody live down on the floor!". Next one of them shouted out to a cashier: "Give me the money!", but she didn't listen to him. Then the bank staff was laughing. The robbers were screaming louder and louder: "Give me all your money! We have a gun!", but they didn't gace the bank staff care. The robbers didn't understand. The bank staff couldn't stop laughing. Then the men saw the wall is imprinted with "World Wide Cryobank". They were so shocked, so stunned. They seemed to be so surprised that they couldn't say any words. So what's left? Flee! Then one of the robbers screamed: "Help! I'm stuck!". He stucked in the large pivoting doors. Finally, they ran off and were arrested by police outside the bank. Fortunatelly no one nothing happened and the robbers couldn't still anything. It was lots of laughter and quite a bit of embarrassment. The judge sentenced them to 5 years in prison. "You have no talent for the job", the judge told them. So, it seems that crime doesn't pay.