Proszę o pomoc :(

[Futbolowa]

Miałam do napisania wypracowanie nt. "Impossible is nothing". Opierając się po trochu na własnej wiedzy, po trochu na translatorze i po trochu na słowniku, skleciłam coś, ale nie jestem tego pewna i chciałabym, aby jakieś bardziej doświadczone oko na to spojrzało i wychwyciło ewentualne błędy. Od mojej matury minęło półtorej roku, w trakcie którego podjęłam się nauki hiszpańskiego i moja wiedza z angielskiego zaczyna trochę kuleć. Dlatego będe Wam bardzo wdzięczna za wszelką pomoc


Impossible is nothing!

There are people who never keep under review. There are people who always fight to the last drop of sweat, to the last breath. There are people who are able to overcome all obstacles and it is not impossible for them... One such person is my fiance, Marcin.

Marcin is a talented footballer - other than speed, has excellent technical skills, and for that he always fighting to the end. On the playing field, he never subjected, and is not to stop. It seems, looking at it from the outside, might assume that the fifteen years before the whole family is praying that he could walk alone...

Marcin, despite its closure and shyness, the child was very vital and any free time wanted to play football. Mom was very difficult to stop son, and therefore allow him to spend their free time on the playing field.

One sunny day, a small Marcin returned home limped. That day completely changed his life, for many months chained him to bed. Two years of persistent struggle to boy able to walk. Finally, there is hope - there was a possibility of a long and complicated operation. Despite the pain and tears, they seem to have - Marcin stood on his feet!

Since then, it's been many years, and the only trace is the huge scars and painful memories. Today, the little boy, who - according to doctors - have never walk, overcomes many kilometers, runs for the ball, walk and traveling the world. And despite that, in the foot again any time may refuse obedience, we believe that it is never this does not happen, because… impossible is nothing!

[Hvid]

Impossible is nothing!

A truth is all the truer if it is sometimes false - there are people who, in spite of their weaknesses and disabilities, are able to achieve much more than anyone could ever expect. There are people who always fight on until their last drop of sweat, until their last breath. They are ready to overcome all the obstacles and everything seems all but impossible to them. One of them is my fiance, Marcin.

Marcin is a talented footballer - other than speed, he has excellent technical skills and he keeps fighting till the end. He never surrenders on the playing field, and seems to be ``unstoppable``. People who don`t know him very well, find it hard to believe that fifteen years ago all his family was praying for him to be able to walk on his own.

Marcin, despite his ``introversy`` and shyness, was always a very vivid child and he always wanted to play football in his free time. It was very difficult for his mother to stop him from doing it, therefore she let him play.

One sunny day, little Marcin came back home limping. That day changed his life completely, he was forced to stay in bed for many months. After two years of constant struggle he was able to walk again. Finally there was hope - there was a possibility of a long and complicated surgery. Despite all the pain and tears, miracle did happen! Marcin stood on his feet!

All that happened many years ago, and now the only traces are huge scars and painful memories. Today, the little boy, who - according to doctors - would never be able to walk, walks many kilometers, runs after the ball and travells round the world. There is still a slight possibility that his foot malfunctions again. Still, we believe it never can happen again... because....impossible is nothing!!!
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To moja wersja, ale znajac zycie, zawsze mozna sie do czegos ``przypiac``, jedno slowo zastapic innym, cos dodac, cos ujac . Nie gwarantuje zatem stuprocentowego sukcesu.

Pozdrawiam

[Futbolowa]

Bardzo serdecznie Ci dziękuję

[verochka]

Hvid: bardzo pięknie wyłapałaś błędy. Brawo!
Futbolowa:Hvid poprawiła wszystko co było do poprawienia, ale abstrahując od tego: Twoja historia jest piękna, naprawdę. Mogłaś napisac o bzdetach, a wybrałaś bardzo osobisty temat. W Twojej historii nie jest wazna gramatyka, interpunkcja czy słownictwo-chyba najważniejsza jest sama treśc. Naprawdę się wzruszyłam. Powinnaś dostac za to najwyższą możliwą ocenę!

Daj znać jak Ci poszło, i 3majcie się cieplutko-Ty i Twój Marcin

[Futbolowa]

Ojej, dziękuję bardzo
Niestety, prace oddawaliśmy prawie miesiąc temu, a jeszcze ich chyba nawet nie przejrzała

[Kwaśna truskawka]

Piękne opowiadania <bravo>